ext_364854 ([identity profile] samwise-girl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] snowdarkred 2009-09-17 02:41 pm (UTC)

Aw, that was gorgeous! I liked that you didn't state implicitly which was which (subtle differences between Xena and Hercules FTW!).
I really like your writing style and this flowed very well. One thing, one tiny, little thing - wandered, not wondered. Well, he might've wondered, but it's more likely that he wandered the world. ^_^

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