This was so good. I've toyed with the idea of Amy in the Year That Wasn't before, and how it must've been to her if she'd survived long enough to hear Martha's story, and I love what you did with it. I loved how you interwove the two different timelines, and how Amy can remember things no one else can, like always. General Pond, the girl who saves people, was a really nice moment and a nice look at the potential inside Amy -- and something that fits nicely with what we saw in The Girl Who Waited. I can definitely see her taking charge. The moment between her and Martha was wonderful as well - validation for Amy and someone knowing for Martha to talk to.

Really well done.