http://mae-stark.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mae-stark.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] snowdarkred 2011-11-01 12:52 am (UTC)

I really really liked this. Not many people attempt second person POV and you did a brilliant job with it. You managed to capture Tony's personality and feelings perfectly within the text.

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