This was incredibly powerful and very well written. Chris's characterization was especially good, he really came alive for me in this. And I liked his connection to the stars and that motif. "Maybe he'll be able to see the stars with his own eyes and trace the shapes they make make with his own fingers. Maybe he can lose himself on stage under the lights. Maybe he'll find himself." Was one of my favorite lines. I can see how this could've really drained you, thanks for writing this and sharing.
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Date: 2010-06-16 11:19 pm (UTC)"Maybe he'll be able to see the stars with his own eyes and trace the shapes they make make with his own fingers. Maybe he can lose himself on stage under the lights. Maybe he'll find himself." Was one of my favorite lines. I can see how this could've really drained you, thanks for writing this and sharing.