That was an interesting take on the Losers' lineage. I especially loved the imagery of Pooch's story. And even though you ended his with the world going to shit, the idea of Jolene holding him and protecting him just makes it seem alright. It's the basis of their relationship. Very well written.
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Date: 2010-07-30 10:35 pm (UTC)I especially loved the imagery of Pooch's story. And even though you ended his with the world going to shit, the idea of Jolene holding him and protecting him just makes it seem alright. It's the basis of their relationship.
Very well written.