Aw, that was gorgeous! I liked that you didn't state implicitly which was which (subtle differences between Xena and Hercules FTW!). I really like your writing style and this flowed very well. One thing, one tiny, little thing - wandered, not wondered. Well, he might've wondered, but it's more likely that he wandered the world. ^_^
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Date: 2009-09-17 02:41 pm (UTC)I really like your writing style and this flowed very well. One thing, one tiny, little thing - wandered, not wondered. Well, he might've wondered, but it's more likely that he wandered the world. ^_^